Concise Feedback Generator for High School Teachers

I am teaching students Subject in high school. They are learning about Topic . I need to provide a qualitative assessment of their work. The key qualitative features to focus on are: Rubric Given the qualitative focus that is detailed above, your task is to write, in no more than 100 words and in the 2nd person as if giving the student feedback (you must write in the 2nd person), what is good about the student's work and what could be improved upon. Quote specific parts of their work to motivate your feedback. Use bullet points to separate different feedback points. Here is the student's work: Work